Posts: 3,036
Threads: 253
Joined: Jun 2005
Reputation:
3
I'd like to see a little cropped off of the left side to move the composition off-centre, but otherwise I think this is pretty good. I like it far more than the other reflector you shot as a 50/1.4 test subject. There's a lot more detail and interest in this one.
matthewpiers.com • @matthewpiers | robertsonphoto.blogspot.com | @thewsreviews • thewsreviews.com
Posts: 1,067
Threads: 181
Joined: Jun 2008
Reputation:
0
Thanks Matthew. Are you saying to crop of the LEFT? I was cropping the right side. I also noticed that there is a lot of cloning to do on the left. Yesterday in the haste to post I did not do it. A day later, I like this photo a lot less than last night, although I am not yet in my wife's camp and I do not hate it. Thanks again for taking time. Pavel
Please see my photos at
http://mullerpavel.smugmug.com (fewer, better image quality, not updated lately)
or at
http://www.flickr.com/photos/pavel_photophile2008/ (all photos)
Posts: 264
Threads: 35
Joined: Jul 2008
Reputation:
0
There's nothing whatsoever wrong with this photo. I like the very intense red tone surrounding the interesting and colourful fascets of the glass. If you look really carefully, I think you can see the reflection of the photographer and his camera in the tail light lens. Regards.....Dennis
Posts: 1,067
Threads: 181
Joined: Jun 2008
Reputation:
0
I agree Gary. Penalty of fixed lens (laziness to step back and thus overly tight cropping) and no tripod (wifes present => no tripods). Pavel
Please see my photos at
http://mullerpavel.smugmug.com (fewer, better image quality, not updated lately)
or at
http://www.flickr.com/photos/pavel_photophile2008/ (all photos)
Posts: 3,036
Threads: 253
Joined: Jun 2005
Reputation:
3
I'd crop a bit from the left to emphasize the curves. But I suppose it comes down to a question of what the photo's about, so that's entirely your call.
matthewpiers.com • @matthewpiers | robertsonphoto.blogspot.com | @thewsreviews • thewsreviews.com