[dhsc08610]

This is a portrait I took of my friend in my front room. feedback would be GREAT.

Thanks

Theo

[EnglishBob]

Hi, Welcome to Shuttertalk.

Portraiture isn't my strongpoint, but to me the shadow on the face is a little dark, part of the eye is lost to me. I'm sure some of the other members will have much more constructive comments than me.

Thanks for sharing your work

[Don Schaeffer]

Generally fine. But you could use a white card or reflector to soften the shadow on the face.

[dhsc08610]

Thanks for the feedback, the last Picture was shot with one flash head but i wish i used a reflector aswell now, on this next one i used two flash heads and i feel this is stronger picture because of it.

Thanks,

Theo

[Banded Drake]

Welcome to Shutter Talk , i agree with the others , a reflector would have helped with the shadow , or a fill light about 1 to 2 stops difference . The side lighting works in the shot though , just a little fill would have helped .


Thanks for sharring , ......... Shawn

[navis01]

Hey Theo welcome to the forums. Yep agree with the others about the shadow on the face, nice engaging shot though. Like the second image although looks a little over exposed, good subject matter though...should I be scared

[dhsc08610]

Yea with the second image i was going for a cold gritty look, thanks for all your Feedback,


Theo