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mists shots
#1

I'm wondering what type of crop is better. Plus a general, but brutally honest critique of the photo would be nice. [Image: boazi3.jpg]

Here's the photo with a tighter, more extreme crop.
[Image: boazi4.jpg]

I'm thinking I like the first one the best, because it shows more of a story. But I like extreme horizontals and I thought this one might be a good candidate. If you can come up with one that would work or suggest one, please do. Or maybe this one isn't a good candidate for it.

D.J.
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#2

The first is a story, the second is a mystery. It depends on what you are going for. Do you want to viewer to immediately 'get' it or do want the viewer to wonder what is causing the mist?

ADK Jim
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#3

Thanks ADK Jim. I think I like a mystery, at least that's what I was hoping for with the crop.
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#4

I like the original picture very much. I like also the idea of mystery... Smile

My crop suggestion for the mystery version would be this.

[Image: 66_boazi3.jpg]

A work of art which did not begin in emotion is not art.
Paul Cezanne
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#5

I prefer the first photo for the story. To me the panoramic crop doesn't have enough context to really be intriguing.

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#6

I agree with Matthew - love the image.

Canon stuff.
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