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i would like to ask for critique of these images and see if someone has a idea to make them better


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(Apr 18, 2013, 08:46)melvin Wrote:  i would like to ask for critique of these images and see if someone has a idea to make them better

Mr. Melvin: I would suggest more contrast on #1. On #2, slightly brighter and a little more contrast. Try and please let me know. Good shots. Joe

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I agree that the first image can be sharper and colors can be cleaner (more contrasty and saturated). Maybe making the picture slightly darker would help. I don't like the selective focus in this.

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The white vignette seems a bit odd, on the first one. You might want to step it down a bit. Otherwise, I think these two photos are pretty good. Definitely above average. Keep it up!
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(Apr 18, 2013, 08:46)melvin Wrote:  i would like to ask for critique of these images and see if someone has a idea to make them better

Heres a lighter and more contrast version of the plant, ill work on the flower vignette and darken it some some,


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