Oct 18, 2008, 10:19
My thought was about bring the scene more closer to the viewer framing just what the story was for you.
I have disadvantages by making this crop, one is that I was not there and somehow I am out of the story and the whole environment that involves this picture, but to me the story is concentrated in the structure of the builiding the line of boats and the reflections.
The horizon is well placed because let me know the source of the reflections and still I have the whole building in the background. About the tilted horizon I only rotated a bit, I think what fools a bit is the slanted pole that is too bright, but easy to clone out.
Here is my suggested framing of the scene. Hope you don't mind I cropped your picture.
I have disadvantages by making this crop, one is that I was not there and somehow I am out of the story and the whole environment that involves this picture, but to me the story is concentrated in the structure of the builiding the line of boats and the reflections.
The horizon is well placed because let me know the source of the reflections and still I have the whole building in the background. About the tilted horizon I only rotated a bit, I think what fools a bit is the slanted pole that is too bright, but easy to clone out.
Here is my suggested framing of the scene. Hope you don't mind I cropped your picture.
A work of art which did not begin in emotion is not art.
Paul Cezanne