Apr 18, 2013, 08:46
i would like to ask for critique of these images and see if someone has a idea to make them better
Apr 18, 2013, 08:46
i would like to ask for critique of these images and see if someone has a idea to make them better
Apr 18, 2013, 15:08
Apr 19, 2013, 08:23
I agree that the first image can be sharper and colors can be cleaner (more contrasty and saturated). Maybe making the picture slightly darker would help. I don't like the selective focus in this.
Nikon D3100 with Tokina 28-70mm f3.5, (I like to use a Vivitar .43x aux on the 28-70mm Tokina), Nikkor 10.5 mm fisheye, Quanteray 70-300mm f4.5, ProOptic 500 mm f6.3 mirror lens. http://donschaefferphoto.blogspot.com/
Apr 19, 2013, 12:06
The white vignette seems a bit odd, on the first one. You might want to step it down a bit. Otherwise, I think these two photos are pretty good. Definitely above average. Keep it up!
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