May 9, 2005, 11:42
White flower.
Thanks Bob for your advice about B&W.
Berries.
Thanks Bob for your advice about B&W.
Berries.
A work of art which did not begin in emotion is not art.
Paul Cezanne
May 9, 2005, 11:42
White flower.
Thanks Bob for your advice about B&W. Berries. A work of art which did not begin in emotion is not art. Paul Cezanne
May 9, 2005, 17:25
Not too sure about #3 but 1 and 2 are very nice, I like 1 for the white flowers in the back.
May 9, 2005, 18:00
Nice blurred backgrounds on #1 and #3, although I think the DOF is a bit too narrow on #3, as some bits are out of focus - especially towards the left.
May 9, 2005, 19:22
I think #3 really informs me. It demonstrates something about growth. Good shot.
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May 9, 2005, 22:48
Hi Irma,
#1: I think the white flowers in the top left create a wonderful balance in the image. The DOF is pretty good although it looks like the front petals are slightly out of focus this doesn't detract from the overall image. #2: I think this is a bit busy. Perhaos if you can isolate a certain part of the plant it will have more impact. #3: I'm not to sure about this one. I think it would benefit from greater DOF and also the branch doesn't feel right. Perhaps try getting in closer to the berries themselves. Definitely #1 for me! Muzza "The goal is not to change your subjects, but for the subject to change the photographer." -Anonymous
May 10, 2005, 00:19
Thanks for your comments I will try again with the berries.
Don, you got the message. Now I just need to get it with a better technique.... muzza, you are right about the petals at the front in #1. This is something I will practice a bit more. The thing is that I am always afraid to get everything sharp. Thanks for your advice with #2. I still have the flowers so I can try again. A work of art which did not begin in emotion is not art. Paul Cezanne
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