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A photo of my lovely wife and daughter. (Amy soon 3 months old)
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Comments a critique most welcome as always.
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Beautiful! The picture as well as your family! Congrats! Very nice pose and awesome models, both of them.
Since you asked for critique, I'd clone out this slightly dark spot above her head. It seems to distract me a little. Maybe the blurred dark line on the left side of the picture too. Otherwise I really like it.
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I don't have any critique Paul, G pointed out some things already. My comment is that this is a very sweet picture. Your wife is a beautiful lady, and your daughter is just gorgeous That age is so beautiful in babies...
Thanks for sharing your picture Paul, you have a beautiful family
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Thanx Irma and Guerito, ill pass the kind words on to my wife and daughter
Thnx G-man for pointing out the dark spot, it has been cloned out.
Made it a bit softer, also applied layer mask to darken the corners a little.
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Much better, Paul! Now it's a real winner!
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Wonderful photo of your two ladies Paul. One thing that I thought as soon as I saw the image was that the soft focus is very nice but to me the back ground doesn't suit is so much. Something out doors ot inside with a window behind her and some landscape showing through the window. Tree's, anything out doorsy. The tone on your wifes face suggests maybe a dusk time photo. Still, it is a very nice shot and don't let what I have said take that away.
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Congrats on the new bub, and lovely portrait of them! Very natural looking!
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Georgeous portrait with just the right amount of soft focus.
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Thnx everyone for the kind words and the critique. Much appreciated.
Picture was taken outside at dusk.
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Good pic Paul.you have a lovely family.
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