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Landscape
#1

I am working with composition lately. Sometimes things turn just a bit square Wink

Spring in Germany

[Image: P1060373springgermany.jpg]

**Thanks again to Petographer for the link of Virtual Photographer. **

Three poles

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A work of art which did not begin in emotion is not art.
Paul Cezanne
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#2

Gotta love the framing in #1 Absolutely superb.
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#3

#1 for me too. I absolutely love the dividing lines and areas of colour - blue, green and yellow. Well done Irma!
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#4

I don't know what it is about #1 but something bothers me. I really like #2 though.
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#5

The texture and little white flowers in #2 works for me.
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#6

These are great. Really mature photographs. Good work Irma.

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#7

Hi Irma,

#1: I think this shot has potential. I am a little put off by the patch of green (grass?) on the left. To me it seems to break up the distinction between the trees and the flowers Perhaps stepping forward a little could have eliminated this. The rest however is as pretty as a picture! heheh All the elements work together to create a very enjoyable shot.

#2: This is a good shot. For some reason I want to see a young girl in a floral dress sitting on the grass reading a book. Dont ask me why! THe shot has a very 'old world' feel to it.

Muzza

"The goal is not to change your subjects, but for the subject to change the photographer." -Anonymous
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#8

I have found very difficul to take good landscapes. The composition in this kind of pictures has been a problem, most of the times my pictures turn out boring. That is why I found interesting the picture #1. I want to try this again but with buildings and houses, to make it even more geometrical.

I like #2 as well. That was a pitty, indeed that I didn't have anything more around...

Thanks for your comments and advice Smile

A work of art which did not begin in emotion is not art.
Paul Cezanne
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#9

Hi Irma
I'll have to agree with Muzza about #1. The yellow stops abruptly on the left. Clone tool? Still very nice.

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#10

Wonderful Irma! Smile

Great little experiments, and #2 is stunning if you ask me Smile Love those little white flowers, they look like they are glowing.

Adrian Broughton
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#11

Thanks for your comments Colin and Adrian. Smile

A work of art which did not begin in emotion is not art.
Paul Cezanne
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