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Puddle on the stree is well intentioned. Its a bit dark, which causes some detail loss, but the reflection has the making of a really interesting photo. I might consider cropping out some of the sidewalk.
#2. Critique wise, there is nothing really interesting about this photo. Its too dark, lacks detail and and identifiable subject matter. The crop does not flatter this shot.
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Hey interesting photo, Don! I really like the reflection of the clouds - they come out quite strong in the puddle. Well done!
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Thanks for your suggestions guys. A tighter crop might work.
The grass picture works better when it is larger. I am using it in a stretched out form as my current wallpaper. lol.
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