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Hi Patch, some very dramatic and harsh lighting you've used - it creates a lot of interest in the photo. I think I would have liked to see more grain in the wood of the door, and also more of the locking mechanism in the bottom right. the 2nd one is obscured by shadow unfortunately.
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Yes, I wonder if backing off by 2 stops and reducing contrast would help the grain? That and a judicious crop would perhaps increase the impact, as the theme/intent is a powerful one.
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