[Banded Drake]

I know that i should have used a reflector on the left side of these but i wanted to see what yall thought. Any other comments are very welcome.

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Thanks ...... Shawn

[Irma]

I like a lot #1 I think it works very nice as it is now... I like the way the flowers stand out from the black background... and I have to say I don't normaly like pictures with black background...
The boquet also in very nice with many colors and different flowers... looks really nice...

About the second one I think lacks composition and the background is distracting... but it might just be me...

Irma

[EnglishBob]

I think you have a lot of dead space, but you know that already with the reclector comment

I would try a tighter crop on the main bouquest of flowers, leaving out the shadow and even the vase. The flowers themselves are excellent.

[Banded Drake]

kind of like this ?

[Irma]

It looks great to me... It improves a lot with this crop!!!

Great advice from Bob

[Banded Drake]

thank you Irma and Bob. I like the crop a lot more too...


...... Shawn