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I like your idea Shane... It looks lovely to me... Her lips are missing a little bit of color detail I think... other than that it looks great...
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Beautiful picture... I really like the selective coloring. Bravo...well done... God Bless.
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Nice work Shane, both the photography and post processing are top notch. The selective colouring works really well...
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Set off beautifully with her dark hair, good one
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Beautiful!
I would be thrilled if I could produce a portrait like this.
The textures, lighting and processing are unique and wonderful.
Since it's in the critique section, I'll mention that I would have cropped a tiny bit tighter on the top.
While tempted to include her entire head, the small gap of light on top combined with the stray hairs up there distract me a little.
I scrolled the image up until my browser window cut-off a little of the top, and it worked better for me. A little cleaner, because the rest of this photo is very clean.
Rest assured Shane, this is a very small personal opinion that probably isn't worth much.
I never shoot portraits of any kind, so please take my comment with that in mind.
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Thank you for all the comments.
Irma - I was lazy with the colouring of the lips. I deleted this pink lips at first because it looked too much like makeup and then I put it back with less saturation but didn't do it properly... I'm still not sure whether to colour the lips at all or even if I should leave just a touch of colour in the rest of the shot...
Brad - Thanks for the comment and welcome to the site.
Shane
Keith - I value your opinion and I always appreciate honest constructive feedback. I did try a closer crop simliar to your suggestion and I agree with you. Just about all of my portrait shots are really close up face shots and I wanted to try to get just one where I hadn't 'chopped' the top of the head...