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The Shopping Mall
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[Image: hallwaySM.jpg]

[Image: skylightSM.jpg]

[Image: displaycounterSM.jpg]

Nikon D3100 with Tokina 28-70mm f3.5, (I like to use a Vivitar .43x aux on the 28-70mm Tokina), Nikkor 10.5 mm fisheye, Quanteray 70-300mm f4.5, ProOptic 500 mm f6.3 mirror lens. http://donschaefferphoto.blogspot.com/
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In the first picture I would remove the blue sign. it is a bit distracting. In this way, I would give more attention to the people walking. I would crop like so. It gives to me more sense of depth, and the isle with plants wouldn't be too centered.

[Image: 26_hallwaySM.jpg]

Because of the crop you did in this one I would like to make it B&W, and remove the light spots around... I find them a bit distracting.

[Image: skylightSM2.jpg]

The third one, I am really sorry, but I can't find the message. There is a lot of information in the image...

Hope this helps.
Irma.

A work of art which did not begin in emotion is not art.
Paul Cezanne
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#3

Nice Don. I think it might work maybe as part of a series?
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