DSLR Photography Forum

Did it work?

No, it doesn't work... at least for me.

I think it works somewhat... but his face, hair etc. still looks too clean and clean cut to me.

There are elements that I really like - such as the right side and the top left corner. I also like the hand holding the pipe. I don't care for the T-shirt and face.

Some alternate crops might have you onto a real winner, here, C. BTW: like your signature.

Thanks folks! Food for thought.
Thanks especially to Nia for being so direct and clear!

Darn fine image...I wonder if the tightness of crop on his head might be accentuating any "issues" with the face? That said, is there a merest tad of over-dodging on the face and shirt logo, or is this just me?

Ooo...just had a thought overnight: I'm wondering if doing the whole image from scratch as a monochrome would help, using a blue filter to add darker flesh tones?

Technically, I think its a very good pic. It just isnt homely enough, no troubles here. It looks like an add for Sun Life or Ford Trucks.