Dec 9, 2006, 03:45
Dec 9, 2006, 05:25
You know, I've often thought about how unfair it is that you have so many tremendously photogenic people around you. She's absolutely darling. Her mood and moment is perfectly captured as well. Excellent image -- again.
If this was in the critiques section, and you'd said that this was the best image from a long portrait session, I'd still be very impressed. I might also say, though, that Id like to see a little more (perhaps a lot more) space above her. A little breathing space or room to move, because I'm sure this quiet moment won't last. I'd also suggest blurring out her left knee a little, since it has landed in perfect focus and is a little jarring with the nice smooth bokeh of the shot.
If this was in the critiques section, and you'd said that this was the best image from a long portrait session, I'd still be very impressed. I might also say, though, that Id like to see a little more (perhaps a lot more) space above her. A little breathing space or room to move, because I'm sure this quiet moment won't last. I'd also suggest blurring out her left knee a little, since it has landed in perfect focus and is a little jarring with the nice smooth bokeh of the shot.
Dec 9, 2006, 06:05
Thanx Matthew.
She's a darling, and a handfull aswell.
I agree that its cropped to tight, and the left knee does stand out a little more then needed.
Here is a re-edit. (the wb is adjusted aswell,to much pink in her skintones in the first version,need to re-calibrate my monitor :-)
Let me know what you think.
Thanx for the C&C.
![[Image: amy_si2b.jpg]](http://www.lindqvist-photography.com/showcase/amy_si2b.jpg)
She's a darling, and a handfull aswell.

I agree that its cropped to tight, and the left knee does stand out a little more then needed.
Here is a re-edit. (the wb is adjusted aswell,to much pink in her skintones in the first version,need to re-calibrate my monitor :-)
Let me know what you think.
Thanx for the C&C.
![[Image: amy_si2b.jpg]](http://www.lindqvist-photography.com/showcase/amy_si2b.jpg)
Dec 9, 2006, 15:00
Very nice. I hope you have some space on your wall for it.
Dec 10, 2006, 18:02
Much better with the redo - lovely shot.
Dec 11, 2006, 05:30
Thanx Chris.
/Paul L.

/Paul L.
Dec 11, 2006, 21:28
Another cute shot Paul. Your kid shots are always great.

Dec 11, 2006, 22:08
She sure is cute.I like the second one best
Lorraine
Lorraine
Dec 13, 2006, 00:28
beautiful shot Paul........like the second edit
Amy is just too cute
Amy is just too cute

Dec 13, 2006, 08:50
awww so cute she is, great picture!