Mar 22, 2007, 16:40
Mar 22, 2007, 16:41
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Mar 22, 2007, 17:14
oh is it time for the crocusses yet? how nice!
I like your number 2, the colors are very vibrant and the background blurr puts the flowers nicely in focus (i.e. of viewer's attention). I might personally try to crop a bit of the right sight, so you end up roughly with a square, or at maybe 8x10
The rim of the flower and the brightest yellow in the stamina looks slightly burned, I don't know if that was your intention, could be a stylistic element.
or if you want, you could try to fix it.
In number 1 I find the background slightly too distracting and the perspective isn't, for my personal sense of aesthetics, chosen optimally
Spring flowers are very rewarding objects, keep shooting!
uli
I like your number 2, the colors are very vibrant and the background blurr puts the flowers nicely in focus (i.e. of viewer's attention). I might personally try to crop a bit of the right sight, so you end up roughly with a square, or at maybe 8x10
The rim of the flower and the brightest yellow in the stamina looks slightly burned, I don't know if that was your intention, could be a stylistic element.
or if you want, you could try to fix it.
In number 1 I find the background slightly too distracting and the perspective isn't, for my personal sense of aesthetics, chosen optimally
Spring flowers are very rewarding objects, keep shooting!
uli
Mar 22, 2007, 22:32
#2 does it for me, lovely & I think Uli's suggestion of a slight crop on the right is spot on. 

Mar 23, 2007, 03:34
Beautiful spring flowers indeed.
I love them, they are the announcers of warmer weather.
They came very early this year, I took some pictures of them 10 days ago and they were already in full bloom.
I love them, they are the announcers of warmer weather.
They came very early this year, I took some pictures of them 10 days ago and they were already in full bloom.
Mar 23, 2007, 09:59
SPRING!!! awww your lucky.
Nice colorful images. #2 is my favourite.
/Paul L.
Nice colorful images. #2 is my favourite.
/Paul L.