I like to see portraits like this. A captivating look, a dramatic profile, and a lovely expression. Lighting slightly harsh, however, on her nose and forehead - maybe use a diffuser next time around.
She has beautiful eyes, nice portrait
Sharon
Lovely looking girl!
2 things i would do though.
Tone down the hairlight, and bring up the exposure the image is a little underexposed.
/Paul L.
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