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Peace Lilly - EnglishBob - Mar 17, 2005

Was taken in the showroom of my Honda Dealership.

[Image: normal_peace%20lilly.jpg]


Peace Lilly - slejhamer - Mar 17, 2005

Pretty. Is that near a window?


Peace Lilly - EnglishBob - Mar 17, 2005

It's acually surrounded on 3 sides by 20 feet high windows.... however the sun only reaches it for 10 minutes a day as it is setting. I took this in that 10 minutes.


Peace Lilly - Irma - Mar 17, 2005

There are two things that I would consider in your picture Bob. The color of the flower, I find it too warm, a little whiter would look better. The other one is the shadow of the pistil, it is a bit dark. I like very much how the flower crosses the picture. The black background is nice, but in my PSP I can see a bright halo in the right up corner, not as appreciable as in PS. Is it intended this way?


Peace Lilly - guerito - Mar 17, 2005

I love the composition of the picture. I agree with Irma in that the color is too warm. My suspicion is that the white balance didn't work properly, auto setting maybe?


Peace Lilly - EnglishBob - Mar 17, 2005

It was setting sun through tinted glass.... for the last 10-15 minutes before sunset each day the entire showroom is orangish in tint.

Ignored whitebalance alltogether as I was supposed to be working. Haven't had tiome to play with it yet.


Peace Lilly - Toad - Mar 17, 2005

I really like the shadow...


Peace Lilly - guerito - Mar 17, 2005

I played with it a little and came up with this:

[Image: EnglishBobPeaceLilly.jpg]


Peace Lilly - EnglishBob - Mar 17, 2005

Very nice Smile Much better. Hopefully I can work on it this week-end.