Feb 15, 2008, 05:56
I like very much your composition, and the colors are very nice.
As I see that the subject is in this case the lace, I would suggest a bit more contrast to bright up the whites.
It could be also a good candidate for a bw treatment with a blue filter so the orange of the paper/cloth she is working on gets darker, and the natural contrast goes in favor of the lace. Problem here is the hands that might get darker too, but with a mask or selective colors you might get them a bit lighter.
As I see that the subject is in this case the lace, I would suggest a bit more contrast to bright up the whites.
It could be also a good candidate for a bw treatment with a blue filter so the orange of the paper/cloth she is working on gets darker, and the natural contrast goes in favor of the lace. Problem here is the hands that might get darker too, but with a mask or selective colors you might get them a bit lighter.
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