Jan 7, 2005, 20:29
Here is a shot of the Entrance to a wedding I recently shot. Tear me down and build me up folks.
Nos an modica tantum nostri somnium
"We are limited only by our imagination"
Jan 7, 2005, 20:29
Here is a shot of the Entrance to a wedding I recently shot. Tear me down and build me up folks.
Nos an modica tantum nostri somnium "We are limited only by our imagination"
Jan 8, 2005, 02:49
Nice atmosphere. Nice softening.
A bit yellow, and too many hotspots for a 10/10 though. Here'a my score: Intent: 9/10 Comp: 7/10 Tech 7/10 Aesthetics 8/10 Clarity 8/10 Biscuits 0/10 Cave canem
Jan 8, 2005, 05:04
I think you have a lot of possibilities with your picture, because it is really nice.
I would first clean it a little with a crop, leaving out the christmas trees. I agree with Rufus in the color, to my eyes is a little too yellow, so I would play with the colors you have around, maybe darkening the outside, I have tried with Authomatic color balance and it works fine... Hope it helps Jerry... A work of art which did not begin in emotion is not art. Paul Cezanne
Jan 8, 2005, 17:03
I like the burnished look of this. It looks slick like new brass. Maybe a little color balance is in order to reduce yellow. But it looks very rich to me.
--Don Nikon D3100 with Tokina 28-70mm f3.5, (I like to use a Vivitar .43x aux on the 28-70mm Tokina), Nikkor 10.5 mm fisheye, Quanteray 70-300mm f4.5, ProOptic 500 mm f6.3 mirror lens. http://donschaefferphoto.blogspot.com/
Jan 9, 2005, 20:45
Jerry: I like the gold color cast although I think some might say that is too much - it still gives a very sunny feeling to th occasion.
Where it needs a little work is: - Rotate the photo 0.5 degree counterclockwise to correct the tilt - Burn the letters "Crystal Room" in a bit to make them more readable The thing that I think would be the most difficult to correct is the reflection on the sign out front - not sure what you can do about that, however. JMO T
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