May 2, 2005, 22:00
I've been messing around with a picture from a recent renaissance fair. Haven't finished yet but I have got pretty far... comments...
The one on the right is obviously the original. ![[Image: bullseye%2002.jpg]](http://www.shuttertalk.com/forums/images/upload/bullseye%2002.jpg)
May 2, 2005, 22:04
Wow, how did you put the rope in? Just kidding...
 Looks good, but I think the white patch of grass on the left looks a little bit fake, if you compare it to the grass on the right side of the people..
May 2, 2005, 22:16
Actually (if this is about removing the rope), I like the rope where it was. The rope brings my eye into the photo. It contains the subject like a kind of frame. It is not distracting.
Nikon D3100 with Tokina 28-70mm f3.5, (I like to use a Vivitar .43x aux on the 28-70mm Tokina), Nikkor 10.5 mm fisheye, Quanteray 70-300mm f4.5, ProOptic 500 mm f6.3 mirror lens. http://donschaefferphoto.blogspot.com/
May 2, 2005, 22:21
Yep, the grass on the left and the tree line need some work. I added half na inch on the left of the picture, so just mass filled that area.
Don: It was more about the chairs, chainlink and people in modern dress that were removed. 
May 2, 2005, 23:25
I guess my definition of "clutter" may be a bit more ruthless than some people's...
![[Image: 98_test.jpg]](http://www.shuttertalk.com/forums/images/upload/98_test.jpg)
May 2, 2005, 23:37
I was going to title the picture "Lend me an arrow" which is why i left the other guy there Toad
May 3, 2005, 00:09
I suppose - but once I cloned out his forearm which is growing out of the archer's face, I just kept going. Because he isn't interacting with the subject of the photo - he is talking to someone else - he divides the viewer's attention - jmo.
May 3, 2005, 06:32
Maybe put the arrow in the other hand.
That kind of makes the guy with the bow look like a twit.
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