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Nikon D3100 with Tokina 28-70mm f3.5, (I like to use a Vivitar .43x aux on the 28-70mm Tokina), Nikkor 10.5 mm fisheye, Quanteray 70-300mm f4.5, ProOptic 500 mm f6.3 mirror lens. http://donschaefferphoto.blogspot.com/
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#2

#1 Too dark and shadowy. As a result, the focus "barbed wire" does not receive the detail and focus it should. Also, the house in the background is distracting and takes away from the focal point... the fence. Some blurring could have been applied.

#2. B&W works for this photo.

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#3

Ok--gotcha.

Nikon D3100 with Tokina 28-70mm f3.5, (I like to use a Vivitar .43x aux on the 28-70mm Tokina), Nikkor 10.5 mm fisheye, Quanteray 70-300mm f4.5, ProOptic 500 mm f6.3 mirror lens. http://donschaefferphoto.blogspot.com/
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#4

Overall I would think they are a tad too dark...

#1 doesn't work for me compositionally, but #2 does...
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#5

Monochrome the image and I think #1 works for me, I like the cloud.
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#6

Thanks. It was the open house of a prefab homes manufacturer. The day was very monochromistic.

Nikon D3100 with Tokina 28-70mm f3.5, (I like to use a Vivitar .43x aux on the 28-70mm Tokina), Nikkor 10.5 mm fisheye, Quanteray 70-300mm f4.5, ProOptic 500 mm f6.3 mirror lens. http://donschaefferphoto.blogspot.com/
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