Jul 5, 2005, 18:07
After the flame there was smoke.
Jul 5, 2005, 18:07
After the flame there was smoke.
Jul 5, 2005, 19:40
Beautiful, and nicely executed! Very classy shot indeed!
If you could clean up the bottom right bits (there are a few streaks which can be easily cloned out), it would be great. Another suggestion would be to add a tinge of colour or some artificial lighting to really make things dramatic...
Jul 5, 2005, 22:20
Another approach would be to crop out the candle altogether. It's a lovley pirouette.
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Jul 5, 2005, 22:34
I like this shot binglefish. The candle works for me. Just a bit more of the curly wisps on top would have been nice.
Nos an modica tantum nostri somnium "We are limited only by our imagination"
Jul 6, 2005, 02:25
jericho Wrote:Just a bit more of the curly wisps on top would have been nice. Yeah, i agree. But would you believe I got this on the first try! It was hard to know how to frame it before blowing out the candle. I will definitely be trying some more exposures and frame ups.
Jul 6, 2005, 05:02
Good effort, esp. for a first try. Crop is way too tight as already noted, but keep at it!
If you need some inspiration, take a look at this guy's work: sensitive light _______________________________________ Everybody got to elevate from the norm!
Jul 6, 2005, 06:57
slejhamer Wrote:If you need some inspiration, take a look at this guy's work: Wonderful work of this photographer.... Thanks for the link A work of art which did not begin in emotion is not art. Paul Cezanne
Jul 6, 2005, 09:39
Looks good. I too would have liked to see more of the wisp of smoke at the top of the image.
Jul 6, 2005, 15:38
slejhamer Wrote:If you need some inspiration, take a look at this guy's work: Hey that guy uses insence. What a good idea. With the candle you only get about 1 second before the smoke runs out, Thanks for the link.
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