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A little puff of wind
#1

After the flame there was smoke.

[Image: smoke.jpg]
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#2

Beautiful, and nicely executed! Very classy shot indeed! Big Grin

If you could clean up the bottom right bits (there are a few streaks which can be easily cloned out), it would be great. Another suggestion would be to add a tinge of colour or some artificial lighting to really make things dramatic... Big Grin
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#3

Another approach would be to crop out the candle altogether. It's a lovley pirouette.

--Don

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#4

I like this shot binglefish. The candle works for me. Just a bit more of the curly wisps on top would have been nice.

Nos an modica tantum nostri somnium
"We are limited only by our imagination"
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#5

jericho Wrote:Just a bit more of the curly wisps on top would have been nice.

Yeah, i agree.
But would you believe I got this on the first try! It was hard to know how to frame it before blowing out the candle.

I will definitely be trying some more exposures and frame ups.
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#6

Good effort, esp. for a first try. Crop is way too tight as already noted, but keep at it!

If you need some inspiration, take a look at this guy's work:
sensitive light

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#7

slejhamer Wrote:If you need some inspiration, take a look at this guy's work:
sensitive light

Wonderful work of this photographer.... Thanks for the link Smile

A work of art which did not begin in emotion is not art.
Paul Cezanne
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#8

Looks good. I too would have liked to see more of the wisp of smoke at the top of the image. Smile

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#9

slejhamer Wrote:If you need some inspiration, take a look at this guy's work:
sensitive light

Hey that guy uses insence. What a good idea. With the candle you only get about 1 second before the smoke runs out,

Thanks for the link.
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