[Don Schaeffer]

[Toad]

Nice - I like it!

I know this is a poor critique but I am getting packed to go for 2 weeks to South Carolina - can only reply on a gut level.

[Irma]

Very nice picture Don. I find the white of the car at the left and the white in the stand ? at the right competing with the white of the lady's dress.... Perhaps if you could work with these colors?

[Don Schaeffer]

Thanks Toad, have a good time.

Irma, that is a valuable suggestion. Thanks.

--Don

[Don Schaeffer]

How is this Irma?

[Toad]

I get the adjustment - I still like the orignl.

BTW: SC won't be a good time - lovely State (polite, friendly and southern hospitality) but I am installing software - no fun - just mindless hard work.

[Don Schaeffer]

Dull accounting software or something creative?

--Don

[Toad]

Mobile wireless software for the medical radiography industry.

[Don Schaeffer]

wow!

[Irma]

I like the second one much better, Don... and I like it because now I can see how the dress is moving!! In your first one I couldn't appreciate this because there was a white line from the car the same color as the dress. ..... Now I can see a very nice curve and the wave of the dress... Nicely done...

[Don Schaeffer]

Thanks Irma