[Don Schaeffer]

[Toad]

I really like this poem and image - which work very well together.

If you don't mind the suggestion, the text is not quite right. The text color/size overpower the image somewhat, and it obscures the light space in the sky which is the primary focal point. I would suggest a somewhat smaller font in a subtler color that does not overlap the light portion of the sky.

I think you have a winner here, Don!.

[Don Schaeffer]

Thanks Toad. Do you like this one better?

--Don

[Toad]

I like the text on this one much better, but I like the first image better - can't please everyone all the time I guess.

Great stuff

[Don Schaeffer]

I'm just too lazy to do the first image over again since modifying the words. Thanks Toad.