[Rufus]

Front room, portable manual flashguns (2), one big reflector, one camera, one niece, one Terrier.

[Petographer]

Great shots Ruf. I like the changes you have made. She definately looks to be having fun.

[Rufus]

Thanks man!

I think youngster and I are both learning!

Now I need more room and proper lights, or cash to hire the studio again! :o

[Toad]

Super - I like #1 the best. One issue - it looks like she is leaning against the white line. If she was actually leaning on a rail or something - you may want to see what that photo looks like with her left arm Photoshopped out. It might look funny - but as-is it breaks the feeling of incredible balance that the rest of the photo exhibits.

#2 works very well - maybe increase your canvas size slightly and add some blue background on the left so that her hand is not touching the frame of the photo.

#3 - perfect - grabs the mood and tone very well. Is that a PhotoShopped floodlight? If so - I did this trick a while ago with the dance portfolio I did. Works really well - doesn't it?

[Irma]

I wouldn't know what to criticize on your pictures. They look great Rufus... She looks gorgeous and so happy in the last one...

Very nice work from the model and the photographer

[Rufus]

I'm greatly encouraged!!!
Thank you.

Mr T. Now then, this arm-on-the-rail is an interesting issue. She isnt actually holding/touching anything. I put the BG in to give the impression of a support. But, maybe that's a pretty daft thing to do, after all, the balance is the thing..... :/ .......Hmmmm.........
Canvas size. Quite right. She jumped so high that the BG was lost, (on the ceiling). I repaired the image, but it's too constricted, isnt it? :/
Yes, thank you. It is a PSCS2 flood. Fun 'eh?

Irma.
Thank you!!!

[Rufus]

Had to fake the finger!!!!!

[Toad]

Much better! As for the rail/balance thing - its your call - just an opinion.

[Rufus]

Ah, thank you Mr T!

I will try a different "rail" image later.... Or tomorrow.
Needless to say, I have 40-odd new pics to play with!!

[byrt_001]

hi

the last one i like. simple

regards

christian

[shuttertalk]

Great pics - so full of fun and life...

[Schellamo]

I love the last pic best too. I have to ask though, what sort of backdrop are you using? is this one of those chromakey ones or something?

[Rufus]

Great folks! Thank you.

Schell.......... Nope. It's just a bed sheet.