[BrynTray]

OK give me some feedback, this was taken by my 16 yr old daughter without any reccommendations from me or her mother....its kinda plain but i love the color! The old butterfly on a flower!

[NT73]

Too much pink, It's knocking my eyes out. The butterfly kinda looks lost. I don't remember what my photos were like when I was 16.

[Schellamo]

Yes, the pink of the flowers seems to bleed into the other flowers so there isn't much definition to them. She must've been pretty quick to catch the butterfly though

[Kombisaurus]

For a first effort by a 16-year old... this is great! She should be proud of it.

I look back on some of my first steps into photography, and would've been happy to have taken that shot (and I was much older than 16 ).
I agree that the pink is very in-your-face, but I guess that's the point. The butterfly is great because it rewards the viewer for looking further into the shot. A blanket of flowers like this needs a subject in front of them to keep the shot interesting. Together they form a background, not a subject themselves.

She's done a great job.