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I think you should use a coloured blanket /sheet for background as it looks a bit bright.
And your little boy looks like he has two black eyes (more steak)
I don't know how to lighten that though, only dodge a little.
Thats how I see it. Others may see it different.
This is with paint bucket, but a sheet behind him will leave all bits of hair etc intact.
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I think he looks great... only criticism would be the little bit of food that's around his mouth, and also a slight tinge of blurriness in the jumper... but other than that, I like the white background.
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The bags under his eyes could do with a little patch just to take away that black eye look - but a lovely shot. Hands would have been nice - but the shot still works.
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I think it is a fine shot. Just the lighting isn't quite even from the window light on the one side.
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Nice soft lighting and background, there isn't much of a focal point though. It should probably be focused on his face, but even that is a bit blurry. (Along with his shirt.)