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Banded Drake · Jun 20, 2007, 17:14

This was shot at my best friends wedding . No this isnt him , but i saw them and had to take the shot . I feel like there is something missing . Any C/C please ..

..... Shawn

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NT73 · Jun 20, 2007, 18:20

Faces?

Banded Drake · Jun 20, 2007, 18:30

How did i miss that ?

Ok other than faces ?

........ Shawn

smarti77 · Jun 20, 2007, 18:52

Im a fan of images that show people walking away from the camera... The image becomes more about their 'journey' and less about the person and how they look.

The black and white and mostly dark forest background creates a symbol of danger to me? I wonder if its the colours of the forest missing?
Shane

Irma · Jun 20, 2007, 23:19

I love this picture Shawn.... Very nice composition. I find it meaningfull, the same way as Shane.... Smile

About the post processing... I am not so sure if I like it so dark. I think I would love to see more light/detail in the green trees and make a lovely contrast with the trunks of the trees. Perhaps if you play a little with the channels?

Paul.R.Lindqvist · Jun 20, 2007, 23:30

Hi shawn!

To me there is to much detracting from the subjcect.

Some vignetting and artificial dof might do the trick.

Also by placing the subject in the right lower corner might have improved the composition.

Thanx for sharing.

/Paul L.

Wedding Shooter · Jun 21, 2007, 02:22

Perhaps a little less road at the bottom and more of the trees at the top would help.

Irma · Jun 21, 2007, 13:18

I like your composition as it is, however, I tried with the suggested crops and I think I like even better.... Smile

NT73 · Jun 21, 2007, 15:07

Sorry Shaun I didn't read the title. If it means what I think it means, then they should be just starting to go past the bush on their left.(for a little privacy Wink

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Banded Drake · Jun 21, 2007, 17:42

Thanks Yall ,

I do appreciate the comments ,

Shane i tried it in color and really didnt like it i really took it with BW in mind so maybe im a little bit biass about it .

Irma i really like the first crop , i think that is what i was/am looking for . And i will play with the channels some to see if i can lightin it up some .

Thanks again yall . ...... Shawn

Irma · Jun 21, 2007, 23:25

That was my favorite too... Smile

Somehow I like the line of the tree, maybe giving a bit of detail would look really nice... I also like the long trees in front of them.

Don Schaeffer · Jun 22, 2007, 12:34

Unbalance it a but more even. Put the pair in the very corner of the frame.

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